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英語添削③ Job changing

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Actually, I decided to quit my job.
I have been worked for 6 years in the same office.
I think it's time to change the circumstances of my life.
And another reason is very low salary.
Moreover, working condition is getting worse.
Our salary was reduced from last summer because we are contract employee.
So, from this this April, I will look for new job while getting an unemployment insurance.

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2008/03/21 02:15
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英語添削②　Learning English

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>How's your English learning?
I haven't studied so much this week because the TOEIC test has finished on last week.
But I have another test of English next month.
It is interview test of EIKEN.
I have to study hard to pass it....
And if I can save enough money next month, I might challenge to the TOEIC test again.
Tests are one of the way to keep my motivation.
It's long way to master English.
By the way, I bought the Aera English last week.
But it was February issue, not latest number.
It featured " How to pass the exam" like the TOEIC, TOEFL, or EIKEN.
I was encouraged by the magazine and I could know how to study efficiently.

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2008/03/04 03:02
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英語添削① Exercise

英語添削を「自分表現集」として使えるようにするために、新しくカテゴリを作成。
膨大な？！メール交換＆添削の中から、特に使えそうなのもを選んで記録することに。　

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Although I always pay attention to high calorie food, I feel I'm getting fat these days.
It's because I'm short of exercise.
Yoga is a one of good exercise for me.
It makes my blood circulation quite well and I can get calm and relaxing.
But if I want to lose weight, I have to do hard practice long time everyday.
I don't have enough time to do it everyday.
So, I do it for well-being at the moment.
Anyway, I seem to need balance between calories and exercise.

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